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Dying at my own hands

Dying at my own hands

toying with the thought that ends all pain

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when the hair stands up on the back of your neck, know that its me in the shadows!
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it came into my head

September 13, 2009

please comment and tell me whether you like this or not... be honest

a boy so shy,

you wanna know why,

a girl broke his heart,

made him wanna die,

alone in his room,

he broke down to cry,

no tears came out,

no sound, he couldnt even shout,

with a knife in his hand,

he looked to the sky,

when he needed her there ,

she didnt even care,

when he needed her most,

it was only her ghost,

pushed to his chest,

doing his best,

straight to the heart,

never again getting a fresh start.

©opyright 2009

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    Posted 4 months ago by Beagleknot

    Omg I love this!

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    MY TRIBUTE TAT, FOR A FALLEN MAGGOT. GONE BUT NOT FORGOTTEN.
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    Posted 5 months ago by thirteen_of_nine

    so darkly sad, and yet so beautiful. you should publish your poems, i'm sure you would have a large following, myself included. stay realatively sane, and stay sic

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    Posted 5 months ago by BobDave

    Very deep and emotional, I like your off verse approach to poetry. The A,A,B,A,B,A to B,A,B, scheme is very offsetting, which co-insides with the deeper meaning that resounds off this poem. Very nice work! I really enjoyed the feelings this has surfacing as you read it. Don't quit writing!!

    BobDave

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    Posted 5 months ago by deathvader666

    ok i dont know what to say yea its good and yea ur good at writing that really does describe me i know we dont know that much about eachother but i really really like u know matter idk u dont have to belive me if u dont want but that s up to u

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    Posted 6 months ago by Number13

    dood i love you and ur poems lol you need to keep writing because i relate to like all of your stuff and its fuckin amazing!

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    Posted 6 months ago by subliminalpurity

    loved the poem I've been going through that I can so relate!

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    Posted 6 months ago by dlwbfil

    true story? dign ur words

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    xx_pin_xx
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    R.I.P DAMIAN <333 MAY HE REST IN PEACE
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    Posted 6 months ago by xx_pin_xx

    dude ur sucha good damn writer!! i admit i love dark stuff like this. and i love how i can see everything in my head when i read ur stuff!!! I WANT MORE MORE MORE!!! <333!!

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    Posted 6 months ago by NiB7514

    damn, i like this one....

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    black engulfs the dying light as he falls on frail wings of vanity and wax
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    Posted 6 months ago by slipknotcraz1

    great poem i want to hear some more so post some more honestly it was very beautiful