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my poem #10

July 8, 2009

very confusing, but a personal favorite.... i dont know why i like it.........

fall and shine throughout.

rise and smear within.

resist the ones care for.

accept the ones you hate.

your life is worth so little.

your soul is worth a lot.

memories let to defeat.

feelings get you killed.

destroy with words.

eliminate with thoughts.

friendships tend to fail.

alliances always backfire.

pain relieves reality.

reality creates pain.

insanity is abnormality.

abnormality is normal.

see all the chaos,

but hear nothing but silence.....

7/8/09

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    Pick me up from the gutter with a gentle kiss,Then rips out my heart to show me, how black it is!
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    Posted 2 years ago by xx_pin_xx

    ohh wow... duude you do realize you keep getting better poem by poem...with this one it was like a song in my head. i like it a lot.

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    I need to put new pictures on here, the ones i have are ANCIENT!!
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    Posted 2 years ago by little_emo

    that's fuckin' awesome

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    Posted 2 years ago by StormSikkness

    I totally connected with this one!! lol I understood every word of it!! Great job on this !! i really love it! =)

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    I met Mick Thomson on October 4th, 2009. that was the best day of my life!!!!
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    Posted 2 years ago by Child6XX

    that was beautiful, poetry is one of my favorite forms of art, and that was awsome. Did u write that, or someone else? i- stay (sic)

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    All the needlenose punchin' is making me irate
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    Posted 2 years ago by coreyxfanxofxtaylor

    you made this, if not, tell me who because it is seriously some great ass poetry right there \m/aggot 4 life

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    I was so lost in life, but I found myself again in death
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    Posted 2 years ago by 6h6e6f

    that is fucking awesome! holy shit ... i love how you show what each thing really is. ITS NOT CONFUSING I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND!