this is a improved version of my poem #2, please comment your opinions so i can improve. my fellow poets think of this as a poem forum......
my soul is untrained against all these emotions.
i feel love, i feel pain, i feel what you may never feel.
i try to go on and fight, but god its useless.
nothing can stop how i feel about you
i see your face everyday and cant help feel comfort.
i accept all my feelings towards you.
all my feelings of love, all my feelings of agony.
agony for needing you to live, to breathe.
but i dont want to feel agony i just want to feel love.
the love that gives me hope.
the love that prevails all.
dont cry, your broken soul will heal.
because if your soul has wounds,
love will surely be the remedy........
6/9/09
