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my poem #6

June 11, 2009

my grossest work of art. if you dont like gross things dont read this.

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cinderella-the boys mother

the prince-the boys father

the boy-son to cinderella and the prince

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nib7514

so what happened to cinderella.

i'll tell you....

after she got together with her prince

they left for the castle, somthing happened.

you want to know... she got pregnant.

but this wasnt any ordinary baby

oh no it was far from human.

a fortune teller had told cinderella

that this baby boy would kill her prince.

in shock she tossed the baby boy, get ready,

in a dumpster, yeah i know wicked huh.

well time passed and the prince

and cinderella lived happy with a girl.

what happened to the baby you say,

i tell you, someone found it and raised,

(gasp people gasp)

well the boy grew up and got married.

now the prince, horny bastard he was,

met the boys wife and, yup you guessed it,

he played a game of monopoly with her,

and then had sex with her.

she went crying to her home

and told the boy that she lost a game of monopoly

oh and that she had sex with the prince.

the boy furious ran to the castle and

killed the prince, remember the prince

is his father, and then ran to the highest

room in the tallest tower and found the princes

wife, which is cinderella, her mother,

they had a game monopoly

then.... the boy had sex with her, i know wicked

then they went their seprate ways, and you know

what, cinderella loved it......

6/11/09

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  • Photo of xxLeVIAthANxx xxLeVIAthANxx
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    With blood running down the walls, good job, fucker, you've managed to beat the wells.
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    Posted 2 years ago by xxLeVIAthANxx

    Damn. This was some twisted shit. But it shows how fucked up the world is. Psht. And it can get more screwed than that, as we all know. Gross as it seems...I still like it.

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    Posted 2 years ago by blue_beauty

    lol damn. It kind of reminds me Oedipus

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    I need to put new pictures on here, the ones i have are ANCIENT!!
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    Posted 2 years ago by little_emo

    ok a little weird my cousin liked it i thought ok what were you on

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    I was so lost in life, but I found myself again in death
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    Posted 2 years ago by 6h6e6f

    wow. i like it. it shows how twisted the world can be. and thats exactly what people need to realize.

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    Pick me up from the gutter with a gentle kiss,Then rips out my heart to show me, how black it is!
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    Posted 2 years ago by xx_pin_xx

    dude as fucked up as some ppl might think this is....well i think its wicked. in some odd way it resembles revenge and how anger can take you to places you would never expect. im liking ur "gross" side. it states the obvious in a very messd up way...just like this world.

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    Posted 2 years ago by StormSikkness

    A lot of sex in this one..... lol sex is good!! XD