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my poem #8

June 23, 2009

i think i was on cookie dough when i wrote this.......

you and i know that we cant

be together forever. i long for

you and you long for me.

i feel completed and i complete

you. theres only one thing

stoping us from being together,

time. every grain of sand that

drips from our life clock is a

grain of sand we are together.

im not sure you'll be with me

forever so i'll make you stay

with me forever.... as you

sleep, i stroke your hair and

its ever so soft. i take out a

knife and put it to your neck.

i feel your skin, cold yet soft.

i look outside and the wind is

flowing in through the open

window. i move the knife to

your heart and raise the knife.

swiftly i plunge the knife into

your heart. and now we can

finally be together as one.

in the afterlife we can be

together, forever. as i put the

knife to my heart and pierce it....

outside... the wind makes a low hum......

6/23/09

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  • Photo of xx_pin_xx xx_pin_xx
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    Pick me up from the gutter with a gentle kiss,Then rips out my heart to show me, how black it is!
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    Posted 2 years ago by xx_pin_xx

    EAT MORE COOKIE DOUGH!! cuz this is real good :D

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    But the longest hours you'll have in your life are the ones you sit through to know if you're right.
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    Posted 2 years ago by Purity8

    Well you might have been on the tainted cookie dough but otherwise-fucking sweet.

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    OUT DESTROYING EVIDENCE! Be back soon!
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    Posted 2 years ago by RebelDrummerGirl

    Wow! I'm speechless; some of the deepest I've ever read!

  • Photo of 6h6e6f 6h6e6f
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    I was so lost in life, but I found myself again in death
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    Posted 2 years ago by 6h6e6f

    holy shit... this is amazing. i can feel the deepness

  • Photo of slipknot9tech slipknot9tech
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    motorcycling.....
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    Posted 2 years ago by slipknot9tech

    i like it!

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    Posted 2 years ago by StormSikkness

    This reminds me of A Little Piece of Heaven! XD i love it!!

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    I need to put new pictures on here, the ones i have are ANCIENT!!
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    Posted 2 years ago by little_emo

    wow murderer and suicidial