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My poem

June 4, 2009

it sucks balls, i know......

as you bleed, you'll bleed for an eternity.

an eternity of pain and sorrow.

an eternity carved out, and now hollow.

as you cry, you'll cry for an infinity.

an infinity ever lasting.

an infinity of shells and blasting.

as you die, you die slowly.

so slowly, it is an eternity.

6/4/09

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  • Photo of xx_pin_xx xx_pin_xx
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    xx_pin_xx
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    Pick me up from the gutter with a gentle kiss,Then rips out my heart to show me, how black it is!
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    Posted 2 years ago by xx_pin_xx

    NO, IT DOES NOT SUCK. i really like it actualy. and i love how u refer to an eternity again at the end of it. is sums up the whole thing. and ppl enough with this emo crap, being expressive isnt emo. do yall even know wat emo is like honestly?

  • Photo of little_emo little_emo
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    little_emo
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    I need to put new pictures on here, the ones i have are ANCIENT!!
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    Posted 2 years ago by little_emo

    are you emo or somthin'

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    WTF..... lol. SMOKE WEED HAHAHAHA
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    Posted 2 years ago by Snuff666

    its not that bad, i write much more graphic shit though...

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    Posted 2 years ago by NiB7514

    shells and blasting refers to wars, you know bullets and all that.......