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Late night graveyard walks drown out the voices in my head. I love the dead.

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thirteen_of_nine
Male, 52
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The voices in my head keep changing the station, Mid Song. So annoying!
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thirteen_of_nine's Blog

To you I don't matter

November 20, 2009

My emotions have been stripped away, my flesh is shredded too.

My heart was torn into little pieces, this was done by you.

My bones are completely broken, my skull it has been battered.

My soul is gone, but this I could survive if to you I even mattered.

The gun is heavy in my hand, I raise it to my head.

For lack of a single word from you, i will soon be dead.

You've taken everything from me, my life it has been shattered.

But I could survive all this, if to you I even Mattered.

                                                              13 of 9

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  • Photo of DiiMaggot DiiMaggot
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    DiiMaggot
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    miss you #2 :'/
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    04/20/11
    Posted 2 years ago by DiiMaggot

    good work. I loved it (: one of the deepest poems I've read in my life

  • Photo of xx_pin_xx xx_pin_xx
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    xx_pin_xx
    Female, 19
    Toronto, CA
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    Pick me up from the gutter with a gentle kiss,Then rips out my heart to show me, how black it is!
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    08/31/10
    Posted 2 years ago by xx_pin_xx

    my maggot you only speak the truth! it's beautiful. i can see the truth and the pain behind every single word. keep writing my maggot! dont keep anything inside for much too long, u will explode at the wrong time this why i think writers,artists,musicians, dancers are the healthiest ppl when it comes to feeling their emotions. they express themselves and they arent scared of feeling emotions even if its something this painful and dark.

  • Photo of tigress3396 tigress3396
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    tigress3396
    Female, 35
    Seabrook, TX
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    I AM ODD AND I LIKE BEING ODD
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    Posted 2 years ago by tigress3396

    Love the poem!! Keep writing.

  • Photo of Brandon44596 Brandon44596
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    Brandon44596
    Male, 17
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    Life is not wat it seems
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    11/01/10
    Posted 2 years ago by Brandon44596

    i dont get but.......its still nicely done. Stay (sic) my brother!

  • Photo of VermilionButterfly VermilionButterfly
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    VermilionButterfly
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    http://www.myspace.com/welcometomygrave - Talk to me on there please <3
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    Posted 2 years ago by VermilionButterfly

    This is really nicely written. I can feel the emotion in each verse, it's very deep and real. Very nice work.

    ~Hillary

  • Photo of Gunnar17 Gunnar17
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    Gunnar17
    Male, 19
    coon rapids , MN
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    "never let the weak forget the glory in pain"
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    Posted 2 years ago by Gunnar17

    wow thats really deep.

  • Photo of cupcake13 cupcake13
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    Posted 2 years ago by cupcake13

    this is really good, aside from the topic of heartbreak because we all know it sucks. :) stay (sic) maggot. <3 Cakes. xxxx

  • Photo of Number13 Number13
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    Number13
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    burning it down
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    07/12/10
    Posted 2 years ago by Number13

    nice

  • Photo of RebelDrummerGirl RebelDrummerGirl
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    RebelDrummerGirl
    Female, 42
    Baltimore, MD
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    OUT DESTROYING EVIDENCE! Be back soon!
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    05/13/12
    Posted 2 years ago by RebelDrummerGirl

    OMG---this is painfully beautiful! I've read it over & over; really love it.

  • Photo of APEGO APEGO
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    APEGO
    Female, 22
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    Hear me!! I'm begging to be heard over the roar.
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    Posted 2 years ago by APEGO

    This is amazing daddy!!! I'm jealous now, wayyyyyy better then anything i've ever written, which would make sense!! LOL

    P.S. Remember your son daddy.