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13 of 9 / wendy's yank / 13666

13 of 9 / wendy's yank / 13666

I'M MISSING MY ENGLISH ROSE

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thirteen_of_nine
Male, 50
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MY TRIBUTE TAT, FOR A FALLEN MAGGOT. GONE BUT NOT FORGOTTEN.
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To you I don't matter

November 20, 2009

My emotions have been stripped away, my flesh is shredded too.

My heart was torn into little pieces, this was done by you.

My bones are completely broken, my skull it has been battered.

My soul is gone, but this I could survive if to you I even mattered.

The gun is heavy in my hand, I raise it to my head.

For lack of a single word from you, i will soon be dead.

You've taken everything from me, my life it has been shattered.

But I could survive all this, if to you I even Mattered.

                                                              13 of 9

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  • Photo of DiiMaggot DiiMaggot
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    DiiMaggot
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    FREE MY SEVERED HEART, GIVE ME YOU ...
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    01/18/10
    Posted 3 months ago by DiiMaggot

    good work. I loved it (: one of the deepest poems I've read in my life

  • Photo of xx_pin_xx xx_pin_xx
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    xx_pin_xx
    Female, 17
    Toronto, CA
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    R.I.P DAMIAN <333 MAY HE REST IN PEACE
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    02/23/10
    Posted 3 months ago by xx_pin_xx

    my maggot you only speak the truth! it's beautiful. i can see the truth and the pain behind every single word. keep writing my maggot! dont keep anything inside for much too long, u will explode at the wrong time this why i think writers,artists,musicians, dancers are the healthiest ppl when it comes to feeling their emotions. they express themselves and they arent scared of feeling emotions even if its something this painful and dark.

  • Photo of tigress3396 tigress3396
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    tigress3396
    Female, 33
    Webster, TX
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    Mad as hell and happy about it
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    Posted 4 months ago by tigress3396

    Love the poem!! Keep writing.

  • Photo of Brandon44596 Brandon44596
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    Brandon44596
    Male, 15
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    life is just abox of chocolates it goes away in the end
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    Posted 4 months ago by Brandon44596

    i dont get but.......its still nicely done. Stay (sic) my brother!

  • Photo of VermilionButterfly VermilionButterfly
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    VermilionButterfly
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    All of my endings are waiting to begin.
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    Posted 4 months ago by VermilionButterfly

    This is really nicely written. I can feel the emotion in each verse, it's very deep and real. Very nice work.

    ~Hillary

  • Photo of Gunnar17 Gunnar17
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    Gunnar17
    Male, 17
    coon rapids , MN
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    "never let the weak forget the glory in pain"
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    Posted 4 months ago by Gunnar17

    wow thats really deep.

  • Photo of cupcake13 cupcake13
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    cupcake13
    Female, 19
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    Welcome to the Asylum
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    Posted 4 months ago by cupcake13

    this is really good, aside from the topic of heartbreak because we all know it sucks. :) stay (sic) maggot. <3 Cakes. xxxx

  • Photo of Number13 Number13
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    Number13
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    burning it down
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    02/19/10
    Posted 4 months ago by Number13

    nice

  • Photo of RebelDrummerGirl RebelDrummerGirl
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    RebelDrummerGirl
    Female, 40
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    GOT ANARCHY!?!
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    Posted 4 months ago by RebelDrummerGirl

    OMG---this is painfully beautiful! I've read it over & over; really love it.

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    APEGO
    Female, 19
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    Done with that, It's over
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    Posted 4 months ago by APEGO

    This is amazing daddy!!! I'm jealous now, wayyyyyy better then anything i've ever written, which would make sense!! LOL

    P.S. Remember your son daddy.